Keep calm and progress — 1
In his book ‘YOU CAN,’ the author asserts that individuals who consistently strive for self-improvement can achieve remarkable heights.
One key approach he highlights is the 50:50 principle — finding a harmonious balance between work and personal life is crucial for a disciplined and fulfilling existence.
Unfortunately, many people prioritize their professional lives at the expense of their well-being. They dedicate immense energy to their careers while neglecting personal commitments and relationships. This pattern is prevalent across various professions, from IT engineers to individuals in all walks of life.
While employers expect dedication and commitment from their employees, it’s equally important to remember that we are not machines. We require a balanced lifestyle to thrive. The principle of give-and-take is vital — strive to contribute as much as you receive. This approach will profoundly and positively impact all aspects of your life.
The author also emphasizes the power of silence. Actions, he rightly points out, speak louder than words. Focusing on achieving goals with minimal talk is essential.
I’ve encountered countless individuals who eloquently describe their aspirations but fail to translate those aspirations into concrete action. Become a silent warrior. Dedicate your efforts to achieving your goals, letting your actions speak for themselves.”
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